My Song Reality

You know my song Reality? Well if not it is a song I have been writing and I wanted to write the update for it. Tell me what you think of the lyrics.

Never in a million years did I say,
that you could play along with me,
just show me to reality,
stop hide'n the world from my eyes,
is it such a big suprise,
let me show you what I can be,
now show me to reality,
now it's time for me to go,
but before I do let me show,
you what I am inside me,
when I'm in reality.
Now I'm out in the world,
and I feel like a ball being hurled,
out of the bondage of a hand,
finally I'm on land,
free to do as I please,
instead of being on my knees,
instead of being changed to the floor,
I'm free to walk,
out the door,
I was barked up the wrong tree,
but now I'm in the real reality.....

(the chorus would be here but I haven't written it yet. :)

My life took an angry turn,
and I'm not sure what I learned,
I don't know what to do here,
so now I'm full up of fear,
I'm not sure what to do,
'cause reality tears right through you,
I feel afraid and confused,
but I also feel used,
as impossible as it seems.
reality tears right through me,
now I know just what to do,
I know just how to move,
I know just what the moves to make are,
I know just what the moves to fake are,
now I understand it,
'cause reality is a bandit,
it stole my life from me,
do I want it back?
Yes please.....

The chorus would be right there and then an new verse, but I haven't written either. I just wrote the new verse half an hour before blogging. So tell me, do you like it?